Comments on: The Sad Girl

By: Decisions, Decisions : Raven’s Beak

Decisions, Decisions : Raven’s Beak — Sun, 24 Jan 2010 03:37:47 +0000

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By: 6 Years, 10 Months, 18 Days : Raven’s Beak

6 Years, 10 Months, 18 Days : Raven’s Beak — Sun, 24 Jan 2010 03:34:32 +0000

[...] be a long week. I’ve already got the basics for the next story in mind. It’s a short I wrote a couple of years ago, and I think it’s worth turning into a novel. At least I hope it [...]

By: Megan

Megan — Fri, 17 Jun 2005 22:31:17 +0000

Expectations nicely inverted.

By: Graham

Graham — Fri, 17 Jun 2005 17:19:48 +0000

Wow, very nice indeed. Ending was totally out of left field.

By: Gerald So

Gerald So — Fri, 17 Jun 2005 09:27:08 +0000

The unique protagonist and compelling use of pictures drew me in. Great pacing to the story. Glad to read your work.

By: Rochelle

Rochelle — Fri, 17 Jun 2005 02:36:48 +0000

Loved the ending, Bob, and the story.

By: Guyot

Guyot — Wed, 15 Jun 2005 19:55:37 +0000

Nice twist. Nice ending.

By: Aldo

Aldo — Wed, 15 Jun 2005 14:37:33 +0000

Bob,
Very nice job. Love how it ends.

By: John R

John R — Wed, 15 Jun 2005 04:50:28 +0000

That’s cool stuff, Bob. Nice twist with the reason for the DNA testing – didn’t see it coming.